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Love Aint Easy Honey by ~Earths-shadow:iconEarths-shadow:

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I love the way you make me feel
But I still find you repulsive
Your smiling eyes entice me
Upon that sickly face of yours

Your sweet voice invites me in
But I hate being alone with you
I can't help but surrender my heart
And it's driving me to madness

You drag your hand across my cheek
But it makes me feel queasy
You look at me so lovingly
And I wish that you would just die

I never want you to change
I detest you beyond imagination
But I love you far too much
I love you for everything you're not
©2007-2009 ~Earths-shadow
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Ok, a bit of love/hate going on. Doesn't relate to my life at all, it's just the way I write ;)
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=WALLWAGER:iconWALLWAGER: May 14, 2007, 1:44:06 PM
Ok.. now that is Awsome..clever idea

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Brother mine,
he who cares for the opinion of the multitude will never soar above the crowd.
Letters from the Masters of Wisdom, second series, letter 22, p. 46
~Earths-shadow:iconEarths-shadow: May 14, 2007, 1:49:04 PM
Ah, so you read them... well if I was one of them occult masters, you'd have fav'd it - you'd have had to ;) Hehe, at least you read 'em :P

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"Typical men. Always confusing their pistols with their privates." - Catwoman
~happydeathangle:iconhappydeathangle: May 15, 2007, 4:25:13 AM
oh well thats cool im glad your not going through that. its a really good peice of writing. your really good at writing from perspective stuff even if u dont know how that feels.
but aaaa i kinda get this eek!

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=WALLWAGER:iconWALLWAGER: May 15, 2007, 5:48:05 AM
yay..

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Brother mine,
he who cares for the opinion of the multitude will never soar above the crowd.
Letters from the Masters of Wisdom, second series, letter 22, p. 46
~Earths-shadow:iconEarths-shadow: May 15, 2007, 9:11:45 AM
;P

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"Typical men. Always confusing their pistols with their privates." - Catwoman
~Earths-shadow:iconEarths-shadow: May 15, 2007, 9:12:56 AM
Thankyou, thankyou. I've been through something similar before, I just like to see things from different angles soemtimes... y'no, like the minds eye and all that. You do? Oh dear...

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"Typical men. Always confusing their pistols with their privates." - Catwoman
~happydeathangle:iconhappydeathangle: May 15, 2007, 11:13:37 AM
oh okay well im glad ur not going through it now thats whats important :)
yeah its cool that u can do that :)
well how the poem relates to me i do lol

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*issues09:iconissues09: May 16, 2007, 2:52:55 PM
Great Job :clap:

I love how she still loves him even though she finds him disgusting, I love thsi kind of Romance :XD:

You did a great job showing this :clap:

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"Writers are liars my dear, surely you know that by now?"-Neil Gaiman

"Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed." G.K. Chesterton
~Earths-shadow:iconEarths-shadow: May 17, 2007, 6:06:43 AM
Again, thankyou, and thanks for the fave too :)

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"Typical men. Always confusing their pistols with their privates." - Catwoman
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